I've read all I have of Boys of St. Leonard's. It's less than I thought there was. I did a bit of skipping around when I wrote what I wrote so I not only have to finish the book, I have to fill in the blanks.
This is actually very exciting since there were some problems that I now know how I want to fix. I don't know if they are the right fixes, but I know what I want to try.
One thing I realized when reading this is that the problem I have with writing mysteries is that I can make a plan and get the characters started, but sometimes I have trouble making them do what I need to to get the story done right. I suppose that's why there are so many cardboard characters in mysteries.
Anyway, I'm happy that I have at least gotten this step done. I hadn't even gotten this far with the last book I tried to edit (Seekretya) last March.
I thought I should post an update since the only way to make sure I get this done is to be beholden to someone/something about it.