From Monica, I guess that's what she looks like when she writes |
Thursday, October 31, 2013
NaNoWriMo 2013 Prep Halloween Day Part 3
NaNoWriMo 2013 Prep Halloween Day Part 2
3. Scenes
My locations:
(although there is far too much land showing (the buildings of Pattell University are tightly packed together) these give you an idea of the types and look of the buildings)
Faculty Building |
LAS Building 1 |
LAS Building 2 |
Library |
Student Union |
Library interior |
Library interior |
Tuesday, October 29, 2013
NaNoWriMo 2013 Prep Continues and HAPPY HALLOWEEN!
Behind me, in the water? |
- Pick software
- Main characters
- Scenes
- Props [yeah,I like that, oh, she means the "stuff" in the story]
- Clothing
- Minor characters
- Style sheet
- Theme
- Outline and/or synopsis
NaNoWriMo 2013 Prep Continues
Frozen Cthulhu, yum! |
- Motto: Victory to the Enlightened
- Established: 1920
- Type: Private
- Location: SE Corner of N. Halstead and W. Division
- Roughly a triangle pointing down
- Borders
- Division on North
- Larrabee on the East
- Halstead on the NE to the River
- River on the East
- Larrabee and Kingsbury on the South
- Students
- Undergrad: 4000
- Grad: 1000
- Faculty: 500
- Colors: Scarlet and Orange with Yellow accents / piping (Scarlet is Engineers and Field Artillery, Orange is Signal, Yellow is Cavalry)
- Nickname: Thunder
- Sports
- Div III
- Men's
- Lacrosse
- Swimming and Diving
- Volleyball
- Water polo
- Formerly had:
- Basketball
- Football
- Gymnastics
- Women's
- Field Hockey
- Swimming and Diving
- Volleyball
- Water polo
- Formerly had:
- Basketball
- Gymnastics
- Colleges:
- College of Architecture
- College of Education and Library and Information Science
- School of Medicine
- College of LAS
- Campus
- Walled campus
- All bricks
- Buildings crammed together - They were designed by the architecture students to work almost exactly like a jigsaw
- No building taller than 8 floors
- 17 Buildings
- Each College has 2 instructional buildings and one residence hall (N to S)
- Hospital
- Medical School Building
- Medical Residence Hall*
- LAS Building 1*
- LAS Building 2*
- LAS Residence Hall*
- Architecture Buliding 1*
- Architecture Building 2*
- Architecture Residence Hall*
- Ed & LIS Building*
- ED & LIS Residence Hall*
- Student Union
- Faculty Building
- Administrative Building
- Library
- Gymnasium
- Natatorium
- Athletic field with 2000 seats
- History
- In 1804 Pattell's oldest son, Louis, left Chicago to attend a university in the east. He met a schoolteacher who longed to learn more. They fell in love and were married. He promised to teach her as much as a man would learn to earn a bachelors' degree.
- In 1808, the father died and Louis brought his wife back to Chicago. By the time they arrived, his younger brother had taken over the paternal duties. Louis and his wife, Louise moved north along the river in an amicable agreement between the brothers. Louis feared that he would be too far from Fort Dearborn to seek refuge there so he moved his house to Goose Island while farming on the east bank of the river.
- In their house, Louis taught Louise everything that he could. Louis majored in astronomy and had brought what was at the time the most powerful telescope west of the Appalachians to his house. He built the house to have an observatory in the top floor.
- The astronomy was useful for the farmers and they published a small almanac.
- Although it was called the Pattell Women's Academy at first as a derisive term, this was the first school for adults in the west.
- It was soon apparent in the boomtown of Chicago that the math Louis knew was much more useful than the astronomy and he gained more and more business students.
- The school thrived and grew.
- By 1820, it was referred to as the Pattell Academy and the first brick building was built.
- The Smith building (named after the financier who invested the money to build it) was 3 stories tall. The first story was administrative offices, the second story was classrooms and the top floor was an observatory. It was the tallest building in Chicago.
- By 1830, the Pattells had built several more brick buildings on the island and moved to the east bank for residence.
- In 1850, Louis died, but his wife and children continued to teach accounting, business, and astronomy.
- The astronomy was dying, but Louise hired an eccentric professor to come to their "Academy." He was a strange and evil man. It was Louise's last official act before dying.
- Louis' son Michael hated the astronomy professor. He built the school so much that they decided to expand to the Pattell holdings on the east bank. Michael built an extremely substantial building for the library just south of his house. This was as far south as the Academy would go in what was named the New Campus.
- The buildings and their surrounding wall on the island were referred to as the Old Campus after that.
- In 1860 both Michael and the evil astronomy professor died. Astronomy was moved off the curriculum and all the astronomic data was moved to the Library for long-term storage.
- Michael's son Henry became head of the school at Michael's death and he named himself Dean. He was not a fan of business or math and he pushed to expand the Academy in the realm of science.
- Henry went to the Civil War as a Signal Officer. He championed the use of balloons for Artillery spotting
- After the war Henry returned with several new friends he had made in the war. They included Artillery Officers, Engineer Officers and Signal Officers, some from very prominent Chicago families
- Under Henry, the school was divided into the Business Division, the Law Division and the Natural History Division. NHD was the smallest but Henry forced it to grow, despite the lack of interest, funds and teachers.
- By the time of the Great Fire, the school had occupied all the ground it ever would.
- All the buildings on the east bank (or the New Campus) were destroyed by the fire except the Library.
- The New Campus was slowly rebuilt.
- Henry was killed in the fire and the Pattell family lost control of the school.
- Former Engineer Officer John Lox took control of the school
- Lox
- Had become an avowed pacifist after the war
- Youngest of the Civil War vets in the faculty, but also the best trained educator
- Came from a very wealthy family in New England
- His family was indispensable in financing the new school
- School was re-designated Pattell University
- The Business Division was converted to the College of Architecture
- The Law Division became the College of Library Science
- The Natural History Division became the College of Natural History
- Portions of the library were used as a make-shift hospital immediately after the Fire. Several of the doctors and nurses stayed and helped form the College of Medicine
- Lox sold off the buildings and land on Goose Island in order to help finance the rebuilding of the new school grounds
- Sports
- As amateur sports took off in the 1880s and 90s Lox insisted that no violent sports would be played at Pattell.
- He most encouraged swimming and diving.
- Lox died in 1915 at 75
- Lox
- Several more lucrative sports were added between 1915 and 1935 (football, basketball, gymnastics), but by 1965 they had dwindled to the current 8 varsity teams
Emergency Worldbuilding Part 2
Death for NaNo failure! |
- "Special physics"
- Organized terrain
- Defined inhabitants
- Uniform method of counting time, weights and measures
- Defined cultures
- Spoken and written languages
- Consistent technological level
- Cast of characters
- The special physics are a sort of cross between H.P Lovecraft's spells in the Necronomicon and Douglas Adams' Starship Bistromath. If you understand math sufficiently and manipulate the equations correctly, given the right set of conditions you can perform scientific achievements so astounding that they are indistinguishable from magic.
- Pattell University is situated along the North Branch of the Chicago River. It is situated so that it should have been consumed in the Great Chicago Fire. I have a fairly good description of it and I will share that later.
- What she meant by this was races, or species.
- I'm not sure how much of this to tell without spoiling things. I do have a sort of mythos and/or pantheon worked out and they play a significant part in the story since the "magical" science was not created nor discovered by humans. It is alien "technology."
- Time, weight and measures are measured in the normal fashion in the US.
- The cultures are fairly standard except the cult. I'd rather not spell that out here due to spoilers.
- English will be the primary language. The aliens are incapable of rendering human speech sounds and we would be unable to pronounce theirs if they had an auditory language. Communication is through mental influence and a constructed language provided by aliens at some point in the distant past.
- Modern tech other than what was provided by the aliens.
- I've shown the characters in the previous post.
- Do a little research
- Have a few rules
- Don't obsess over consistency
- Consider what's good and what's bad about your world
- Create characters who are plausibly the products of your world
- Given the time limit I've given myself, there can be only little
- Again, I'm forced to simplicity. I will follow all known laws of physics in this story. What physics doesn't know is where I will fabricate, stretch and BS.
- Okay
- This is probably the place where we can really sink our teeth in.
- Good
- There are good people
- There are brave people
- People do fall in love
- Bad
- There are evil people
- There are powers beyond our comprehension that is insanely dangerous to our entire planet and completely indifferent to our whole galaxy. It isn't that the universe is out to kill us, the universe is just deadly and destructive period.
- Being good and brave will not help in the end
- Love may just be instincts, our genes driving us to procreate them, a chemical mix that has nothing to do with destiny or true love.
- Life is the result of random forces and will end as a result of random forces
- Certainly, I always do. I feel that characters are a strong point for me.
Monday, October 28, 2013
Emergency Worldbuilding Part 1
Got's to be quick about this, you never know who might be after you. |
I can only hope that I crash through this window and get there to find that the few things I have in my pockets and my presence are enough to solve whatever problem it is that caller wanted to frantically tell me about.
I can't believe I've been thinking about some of these characters and this story concept for five years without putting them in a story! You can't find the characters fleshed out, and the ideas I was banging around here. I'm not going to use all of them or at least not all of them as they are depicted in that post. I'll let you know how I change them in the next couple of posts when I get to the appropriate part of worldbuilding.
Ok, starting with Holly Lisle's requirements to start a novel:
- Know your world
- Know your characters
- Know your conflict
- Embrace a theme
- Determine a voice
- Know your genre
- Know your expectations
- The world will be Chicago in the present. However, it's not quite that simple.
- I will be using Pattell University as the main setting and that's fictional.
- I'll also be assuming a whole specific universe, one in which there are aliens and with the right application of mathematics humans can do things that appear to be magic.
- Those two pieces need work
- Characters, I got's this. Four big changes from my old 2008 post:
- Lucy LaBarbara - without spoilers let's just say that she is not a professor, and not an alien. She is the leader of the cult and has access to a great deal of power and knowledge.
Peter Nicostratus(renamed Phillip O'Higgins)- not too old and not eyeless. He is an anthropologist that specializes in Cryptotheology, or as he calls it Cryptolatrology (Greek for the study of hidden worship)- I'm adding two characters:
- Chitra Abberline: a private detective, formerly a Chicago Police Officer. She was dismissed from the force after phychiatric care resulting from an incident which cause a mental breakdown. She was the officer on the scene in which unspeakable acts were performed and "magic" was used. She actually has no mental illiness but the scene was simply too much for her mind to handle. She has learned how to handle the memory, but it came too late and her superiors were biased against her as a female officer. She is physically active and fit, if rather plain looking and unimposing in size. She is a capable investigator and
- Ethan Gagnon: a cultist. He is a student at Pattell University and started the cult. He has access to certain relics and was able to work out some basic mathematical spells. He believes the universe must be brought to an end and a new one raised in its place, but he believes this must be done from the energy generated by the suffering of sacrifices. He led the cult until Lucy arrived. He hates the loss of power and subverts the group whenever possible. He does not and cannot understand reality to the extent Lucy does.
- My conflict will be the struggle for an ancient relic that may be a portal to unimaginable power, but also inconceivable reality that will stretch human mental and emotional capacity like trying to fill a water balloon with a fire hose.
- The theme is actually multifacited
- The universe is not only more complicated than we imagine, but more complicated than we can imagine, and trying to do so will cause a mind-BLOWING experience
- The eventual collapse of even the most powerful human, or more broadly, earthly conceits. "Dust in the Wind" as it were.
- Horror doesn't have to be ugly, at least not to look at
- I will be using third person limited. My powers of mathematics are far too feeble to assume anything more comprehensive. My POV will be as if I'm a ghost in the head of the detective, or just over her shoulder. Depending on how the writing goes I may also haunt Larry's shoulder (that was the original intent of the story).
- I'm shooting for a sort of gothic horror. I've written this before with some success, so I feel most confident here.
- "'Do you expect me to talk?' 'No, Mr. Bond, I expect you to die.'"" I expect to win, to finish the book with a real ending. With that in mind I'm going to throw in placeholders where needed for details and descriptions. I may even write the thing like stepping stones, jumping from scene to scene, giving a brief synopsis of each, and when that's done going back and filling in as much as I can until the time runs out. If you can imagine a pyramid laid out in perfect symetry so that the base is equal to the height, that was my last successful NaNo attempt, or at least the plan. 2/3rds of the way through I realized I'd never make it to the full height so I cut the angle and reached a peak, but far short of the originally intended height (I truncated the ending). This time I intend to build like a skyscraper instead. I'll build the frame and starting hanging the walls on it until the time runs out. It will have the right height (ending) but need to be filled in.
Saturday, October 26, 2013
Time to Get Kraken
I'm trying to write here, Mr. Cthulhu |
seem too late, but I figure if I buckle down and get cracking I can be ready to at least write it as a discover novel.
I have a couple of guides to help me prepare. I've done 30 Days of Worldbuilding before, but I don't have that kind of time now. I'm going to have to use an abbreviated guide.
First, to start a novel Holly Lisle says:
- Know your world
- Know your characters
- Know your conflict
- Embrace a theme
- Determine a voice
- Know your genre
- Know your expectations
- "Special physics"
- Organized terrain
- Defined inhabitants
- Uniform method of counting time, weights and measures
- Defined cultures
- Spoken and written languages
- Consistent technological level
- Cast of characters
- Do a little research
- Have a few rules
- Don't obsess over consistency
- Consider what's good and what's bad about your world
- Create characters who are plausibly the products of your world
- Trade
- Religion
- Geography
- Countries / maps
- Politics
- Culture
- Magic [or SF tech if appropriate]
- Pick software
- Main characters
- Scenes
- Props [yeah,I like that, oh, she means the "stuff" in the story]
- Clothing
- Minor characters
- Style sheet
- Theme
- Outline and/or synopsis
- Prepare a synopsis in order of occurrence
- Prepare a synopsis in order of narration
- Write out the story
- Refine
Thursday, October 24, 2013
My Next Book Will Involve a Library
Again, this year the weather is crazy cold and cloudy. Again, my thoughts turn toward horror, but this year I've been thinking about what I can write and what I can't. What I can write includes horror.
Did I mention I'm very seriously considering participating in NaNoWriMo?
Well I am.
Time Isn't Holding Up
After a "once in a lifetime" trip, when I found myself "in another part of the world," "with a beautiful house and a beautiful wife..." I grabbed my Google calendar and my notebook do do some calculatin'.
I figure I can write about 1,000 words an hour. When I'm really in the writing mood I'm actually "writing" all day long and the word count is merely the time it takes to type. I am a very slow typer (16.7 words per minute). This means that I need 50 hours in order to get my book done.
The way I counted I should have 58 hours to type. That's enough, Tha's e-NUF!
Now I just need to come up with the plot, characters, theme, mood, and location. No biggie at all.
Wednesday, October 23, 2013
Monday, October 21, 2013
Sunday, October 20, 2013
Thursday, October 10, 2013
Tuesday, October 08, 2013
What I Can't Write
There were some things Lovecraft couldn't draw |
I seem to be telegraphing my antagonist when I write mystery. I don't know if I don't have the right kind of devious mind, but my bad guy is too obvious too early.
I don't have the math skills for hard science fiction. The kind of sci-fi I'm thinking of you really need to be able to explore the mathematical possibilities of things and I just don't have the math chops to even ask a math/physics person a question they won't scoff at (I know, I've tried). I also don't have a hard science education. Anthropology is considered a "soft" science.
I can't write romance or police procedurals because I just don't like them. I don't like them enough to read them, I would never be able to write them. You may be confused by my dislike of police procedurals, but you see I don't see that subject as one suitable for entertainment.
High fantasy is a bit of a puzzler. I love certain fantasy, Tolkien, Pratchett, Asprin, Le Guin spring to mind. I just can't stand others. Again, if I can't read it I could never write it. I don't think I could write it based on a very few authors because the sample size is just too small. Additionally, I just can't get into it the way some people can. I'm just not comfortable working in the genre. I had been at one time, but I think I'm in a different place in my life and it just doesn't sit right with me anymore.
I'm not moaning or whining. This is purely analytical and I'm using the process of elimination to determine what I CAN write.
What does that leave me? Soft SF, contemporary fantasy, horror. What type of horror? Not slasher, I don't know about suspense, but I think I'm pretty good as weird fiction.
What I like to read: Mystery (mostly cozies or cozy-esque), Hard SF, very select fantasy and very select horror.
Very select horror? Why would I be able to write horror and not fantasy if my reading tastes are similarly limited in either genre? I'm not really sure, but horror is what I've sold. About 75% of the very very VERY meager earnings I've made have been with horror stories, or at least weird fiction.
I think it may be because it doesn't scare me to write it. You know how it was always your older sibling, the one that wasn't actually afraid that told all the scary stories when you were young. They were able to get into it with intensity and enjoy it. They could dig in and make it ghastly and suspenseful. It didn't bother them to leave a hero hanging over the edge of a cliff until the next bedtime story or to kill everyone off at the end of a campfire story.
The trick to writing that way is to keep your audience's fear in mind. I have heard some authors that write what scares them, and that's great because they can check the effectiveness against themselves. My way I can't do that, but if I always keep my audience in mind, which I do, I can do it reasonably well.
I think another trick is to make it as believable as possible for as long as possible. That way the audience won't know when you strayed from actual facts and into the woods. They will just suddenly find themselves in the deep dark without knowing how they got there or how to get out. No idea how to get out at all.
Sunday, October 06, 2013
Chicago in Morogoro
I spotted this while I was out walking yesterday. I know there must have been some sort of strange geometry because it took me about two hours to walk just over 4.25 km. And then it took only about an hour to get back.
Also frustrating and confusing, I only got to see the first ten minutes of the All Blacks and Springboks battling it out for the Championship Rugby title. If you want to know more, send me an email.
Saturday, October 05, 2013
But Where's the Necronomicon?
I have a lot of really great ideas so the first challenge will be to narrow it down. The second, and much bigger challenge will be to execute the plan.
I went to three bookstores and the regional library today. I thought that finding Lovecraft in Swahili would be a great boost to my motivation, but alas there was no Lovecraft. I turned from the L shelves and found this little grouping.
Remember how I was writing about Hemingway, and there he is, very close to Herbert's Dune. Maybe I need to write about worms (I'll be sure to step without rhythm).
Friday, October 04, 2013
Cthulhu hotel
It may not seem to Lovecraftian, but this hotel next door to me is full of stuff like this wall. I could easily see Hemingway sitting here and writing a novel. In fact, last night I started the very preliminary work for my next novel. This one is going to be a horror one. I'm getting myself ready by reading "At the Mountains of Madness."
BTW, this mountain is very real. It is the Uluguru mountains and I walk by them every day. There are no zebras (at least there aren't any more) there is actually a soccer pitch where the painting shows zebras. The horror!
Thursday, October 03, 2013
Tuesday, October 01, 2013
Kalo mena Africa
It's a marvelous night for a moon dance - not. It's raining pretty well here.
And here we are again in Cthulhu month except this time I'm starting it in Africa. I'm roughing it a bit, without my computer right now or my Greek fonts.
Come great old ones or high water I will post the new poll tomorrow. I might be able to dredge up some African flavored Cthulhu stuff, but for now you'll have to make do with what I find.